Feed Back From My Pitch

This feedback was from the pitch that I had done with my previous group mate Emma. We are now working on our own, which means that I came up with a new idea and therefore presented this new idea with a new pitch.

Quality of PowerPoint / use of ICT:

-          Plenty of visuals

-          Original PowerPoint Lost, last minute edit.

Quality of presentation:

-          Under rehearsed

-          Not very well explained, one idea at a time.

Quality of ideas:

-          City – London – gang culture – not clear.

-          Church – religious thriller- more possibilities.

Use of thriller conventions:

-          In costume – setting

-          Subgenre conventions?

-          Some references to other thrillers

Issues ? 

                                   

-          Travelling around London – expensive and time consuming

-          20 people? Watch the wicker man